Portfolio Critique

fullofpaintfullofpaint Registered Users Posts: 103 Major grins
edited April 11, 2011 in Other Cool Shots
Working on my senior portfolio and part of that is photography. I'd love to some feedback on maybe the top 5 out of these. Not necessarily concentrating on one style or type of photography, I'm kind of all over the map with these.
#1 Streetcar named Desire
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#2 Thinking
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#3
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#4 Early Morning
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#5 The Count of Monte Cristo
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#6 The Duel
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#7
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#8
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#9 Wheelin
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#10 Tom Hallen, Senior VP of Programming at AMC
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#11
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#12
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#13 Silent Night
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#14
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#15
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#16 Game Time
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16-35 2.8L, 70-200 2.8L, 24-105 4.0L
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Comments

  • DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited April 10, 2011
    If you truly want feed back on these, you should A) put line spaces between your images so they don't run together and B) number them so it is easy to reference which image is being critiqued.

    Some good shots here!

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  • Art ScottArt Scott Registered Users Posts: 8,959 Major grins
    edited April 10, 2011
    DonRicklin wrote: »
    If you truly want feed back on these, you should A) put line spaces between your images so they don't run together and B) number them so it is easy to reference which image is being critiqued.

    Some good shots here!

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    Don

    TOTALLY 15524779-Ti.gifagree

    and I for 1 would like titles but that is not totally necessary..............
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  • fullofpaintfullofpaint Registered Users Posts: 103 Major grins
    edited April 10, 2011
    Whoops! I thought I had, let me go fix that...
    Canon 5DMk2, Canon 40D
    16-35 2.8L, 70-200 2.8L, 24-105 4.0L
    www.timkerigan.com
  • PhotogbikerPhotogbiker Registered Users Posts: 351 Major grins
    edited April 10, 2011
    Nice work
    Nice group of shots. Even though you say you are "all over the map" the majority of your photos have people in them. People at thought, recreation, etc. Good capture of some emotions. Keep going!

    Couple minor nits to think about. Be a bit of a perfectionist and get your images to their best possible condition when you submit for final. #2 has a lot of dust on it (looks like you borrowed my 28-105!). Clone and clean these up. The leaves in the upper right of #4 are distracting IMO. Kind of thing you prefer to catch when taking the shot, but I would spend some time either cloning or cropping them out here.

    Nice stuff and shows a good eye for capturing the moment and composition. I'd group them a bit with a broad theme ("emotions") or something, and see how it works. Keep shooting, great foundation here. Keep posting to Dgrin and lets see your work develop.
  • AzzaroAzzaro Registered Users Posts: 5,643 Major grins
    edited April 11, 2011
    I would go with 1, 2, 5, 14 & 16

    Did you tilt the camera on this one intentionally?

    Two is pretty soft and would benefit from a little PP...

    Five I think would be better if you would cover the stage with smoke.. A little work with a cloning tool.

    Fourteen I would crop and get rid of the guy on the right...but save the sign

    Sixteen is a little soft I think a little PP would help......
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