Noon car ferry

ruttrutt Registered Users Posts: 6,511 Major grins
edited October 1, 2005 in Holy Macro
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  • DavidTODavidTO Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 19,160 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    Rutt,

    You lost me on this one. It's dark, lacks a subject, as far as I can see. I don't get it.
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  • ruttrutt Registered Users Posts: 6,511 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    Nobody could question its darkness. The subject is powerful for me, but perhaps it's too personal. I have very strong associations with this particular boat.

    That's what good honest critique is good for. Thanks.
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  • XO-StudiosXO-Studios Registered Users Posts: 457 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    This looks like one of those 'you had to have been there' atmosphere shots. I can imagine this shot looking better printed.

    FWIW,

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  • DavidTODavidTO Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 19,160 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    rutt wrote:
    The subject is powerful for me, but perhaps it's too personal. I have very strong associations with this particular boat.


    That I can understand.
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  • ruttrutt Registered Users Posts: 6,511 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    XO-Studios wrote:
    This looks like one of those 'you had to have been there' atmosphere shots. I can imagine this shot looking better printed.

    FWIW,

    XO,

    Thank you very much. With shots like this, honest criticism is really important. It's hard for me to know if they are just too personal or not.
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  • W.W. WebsterW.W. Webster Registered Users Posts: 3,204 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    I'm struggling to come up with any redeeming feature for this photo. Is it me?
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  • ruttrutt Registered Users Posts: 6,511 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    W.W. Webster wrote:
    I'm struggling to come up with any redeeming feature for this photo. Is it me?

    Apparently not. It seems to have that "only a mother could love" thing going on.

    Thanks very much for your frank criticism. It's just as useful to know when others don't see it as when they do, especially when trying out a stretch shot like this one.
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  • behr655behr655 Registered Users Posts: 552 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    Reminds me of an image from the old computer game 'Mist'.
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  • HiggmeisterHiggmeister Registered Users Posts: 909 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    Hi Rutt,
    I too am lost with this image as it stands. What I do see lies in the portal and the steps. I really like the lighting and think the comp could work with a tighter crop on that area. As for emotion, it's all in you.

    So, are you going to tell us the meaning behind the photo. What is it that you see (some psycho analysis).

    Interesting,
    Chris

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  • gusgus Registered Users Posts: 16,209 Major grins
    edited September 30, 2005
    I think its a great subject however i find the light from the left & right distracting to the shot. Rutt have you considered cropping just the centre of the porthole & stairs ?
  • pathfinderpathfinder Super Moderators Posts: 14,708 moderator
    edited October 1, 2005
    I think gus is onto something here - the left one third of the image is non-essential and the right 1/4 or so also is irrelevent. The real image is the porthole and the light on the stairs - Just a little more light on the stairs ( not too much ) and this might be more interesting.
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