Last minute Critique

fullofpaintfullofpaint Registered Users Posts: 103 Major grins
edited April 17, 2011 in People
So handing in my portfolio for my capstone class tomorrow and just want one last critical eye going over the photos I'm turning in haha.

#1 Sports: Wagon Wheel Game
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#2 Products: www.milliespierogi.com
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#3 Photojournalism: Silent Night
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#4 Headshots: Hippolytus
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#5 Automotive:
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#6 Sports: Hurricane Tournament Series
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#7 Art: Taylor Morning
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Canon 5DMk2, Canon 40D
16-35 2.8L, 70-200 2.8L, 24-105 4.0L
www.timkerigan.com

Comments

  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited April 17, 2011
    1. What's Capstone?
    2. How much post are you allowed to do? If so, that headshot could use a touch more skin softening to minimize her pores and reduce the dark circles under her eyes - don't go overboard since it still needs to look natural, but a bit of refining would improve an already excellent shot.

    Some nice shots! Clearly you're putting that 5dII to good use... thumb.gif
  • fullofpaintfullofpaint Registered Users Posts: 103 Major grins
    edited April 17, 2011
    Thanks!

    Capstone's kind of like the wrap-up for the major. Mostly it's about developing our final portfolios, websites, and finding jobs. I'm actually a film major, but putting some of my photography in this thing can't hurt!

    No limit of processing so I'm gonna go and touch that up a bit more.
    Canon 5DMk2, Canon 40D
    16-35 2.8L, 70-200 2.8L, 24-105 4.0L
    www.timkerigan.com
  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited April 17, 2011
    yeah, use clone brush in "lighten" mode about 30% opacity (or less) to lighten up those undereye shadows. WIll work on the pores too if you use it at about 15% opacity.
  • divamumdivamum Registered Users Posts: 9,021 Major grins
    edited April 17, 2011
    PS Your Cookie shot is either hilarious or mildly obscene and I can't decide which!! rolleyes1.gif
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