Critique my new site?

fullofpaint

So just finished building my site and looking for some feedback

www.timkerigan.com

Known Problems:
Portfolio pages text doesn't work because it pulls the list as well as the description.
Images on main page look funny
No photography yet, the gallery's keeps breaking the page:/

Any thoughts? I left out an about me page, do you feel it should be there?

chrisjohnson

fullofpaint wrote: »

So just finished building my site and looking for some feedback

www.timkerigan.com

Known Problems:
Portfolio pages text doesn't work because it pulls the list as well as the description.
Images on main page look funny
No photography yet, the gallery's keeps breaking the page:/

Any thoughts? I left out an about me page, do you feel it should be there?

It looks slick.

You lose me because I am not sure what to do on arrival.

There seems to be a lot of unrelated ads on top, portfolios lower down.

Do you want me to simply enjoy the images, hire you to take pics of the food in my restaurant, cook the food, or drive me around in a hot car. What? When you are selling services I prefer to see clearly which service and where you are for starters. Your site does not even make clear that you are a photographer. It looks like you just want me to admire you for being brilliant on the internet - ok I do, now what.