1st search for rust: C&C welcome

Snowgirl

I took my dog for a walk through town and we passed by the provincial agricultural museum. Several of the larger pieces of equipment had been left out over the winter and recently emerged from the snow, in some cases a little the worse for wear.

Any thoughts or suggestions?

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2. Metal rim on a wooden wheel


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There are a few more in this gallery as well, if you're interested.

Thanks for looking.

DonRicklin

Not bad for a beginner. The first and second need lots of Saturation, clarity and sharpening! The OOF parts could be mostly cropped off the right side of both!

Rust Rules

Keep at it!

Don

Juano

There's potential here. I looked at your gallery and you have some nice ones. In my case I like to fill the frame with the rusted parts and lose most or all the background. Which means you have to get close.

Keep going at it

jiro

I totally agree with Don - crank it all up, Girl! thumbclap

Snowgirl

Thanks guys. I'll keep at it. Much appreciated!

Snowgirl

I edited two of them - what do you think?





Next time I'm down that way I'll definitely get closer!

DonRicklin

Now you're on you way to proper Rustafarianism!



Don


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Juano

Much better!!!

Snowgirl

Merci beaucoup mes amis!

Azzaro

I love the rework.....you done good

Dogdots

The rework is awesome

Richard

Dogdots wrote: »

The rework is awesome

Less is more.

Snowgirl

Thank you all. I feel inspired to continue the search for the rust in my world. Since I live near the Bay of Fundy (salt air) there should be lots to find as time permits