The closer you get to the picture the better it gets...

MolsondogMolsondog Registered Users Posts: 159 Major grins
edited May 25, 2011 in Street and Documentary
Or is it the other way around?

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited May 24, 2011
    Nice detail and exposure here, but it doesn't quite work for me. I think the problem is that too much of the frame contains kitschy art. It took me several viewings to realize that the background behind the guy wasn't yet another painting. Perhaps a tighter crop would help.
  • PhotogbikerPhotogbiker Registered Users Posts: 351 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2011
    There is a great shot in here. Agree with Richard, crop right in on them and the expression on his face and the closeness of customer to painting will be the clear focal point.
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited May 24, 2011
    Hmm...I just noticed that the picture he is holding up is the same as the one in the upper right. So maybe just lose the rooster. ne_nau.gif
  • twinsmomtwinsmom Registered Users Posts: 83 Big grins
    edited May 24, 2011
    Molsondog wrote: »
    What's great about this forum is the outstanding critique. Here's to the two posters who say "crop out the junk". Square is good.

    Better?
    i-qVBc2QZ-L.jpg

    I liked the cropped version. I also didn't realize that the building behind him wasn't a picture without studying it.
  • NyarthlopicNyarthlopic Registered Users Posts: 274 Major grins
    edited May 25, 2011
    I like the cropped version much better, twinsmom!
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