Sunset on the Western Australia Coast

tbasten

Hey Guys and Girls.

Just wondering if you could give me some of your opinions on the above photo?

Thanks
Tim

W.W. Webster

tbasten wrote: »

Just wondering if you could give me some of your opinions on the above photo?

What photo? Show it here!

W.W. Webster

tbasten wrote: »

Just wondering if you could give me some of your opinions on the above photo?

Lovely light and refection off the sand. I'm in two minds about the horizon bisecting the image.

However, is the horizon level? Also it's not clear what's going on in the dark patches (rocks, maybe?) - is there relevant detail in there you can draw out a little?

tbasten

I dont think so however I did capture another image of the same sunset which has more detail in it

W.W. Webster

tbasten wrote: »

I dont think so however I did capture another image of the same sunset which has more detail in it

Now I can see what's going on in there! Btw this suffers even more seriously from sliding sea syndrome.

Is the first one a raw image? Have you tried to lighten up the rocks areas slightly? While it remains as a black spot, I feel it's a distraction, but others may have different opinions or suggestions.

tbasten

Yes it is raw, ill see what i can do

tbasten

W.W. Webster

Do you agree?

tbasten

W.W. Webster wrote: »

Do you agree?

Yeah, I see what you mean. Give it a bit more interest in the photo

eoren1

Much better with the foreground rocks lightened