Where's Daddy?

Raz

Another candid I like (and I always say I hate taking photos of people...).

Her daddy left her to get some ice cream.

Critique and comments are most welcome.



Thanks,
Raz

lynnma

Raz wrote:

Another candid I like (and I always say I hate taking photos of people...).

Her daddy left her to get some ice cream.

Critique and comments are most welcome.

Thanks,
Raz

HI Raz.. I love the expression and the composition.. I'm not totally sure of the color filter.. I'd love to see the original color

Raz

the original
Thanks for your comment, Lynn. Here's the original, straight out of the camera, except for cropping.

I also like her expression, but I felt more could be done on it. I think her eyes and eyebrows are more projecting with the color filter. I tired B&W as well, but couldn't reach an effect I liked.

I'd be glad to hear your opinion.



Thanks,
Raz

lynnma

Raz wrote:

Thanks for your comment, Lynn. Here's the original, straight out of the camera, except for cropping.

I also like her expression, but I felt more could be done on it. I think her eyes and eyebrows are more projecting with the color filter. I tired B&W as well, but couldn't reach an effect I liked.

I'd be glad to hear your opinion.
Thanks,
Raz

Hi raz.. I like the original but also like the drama of a conversion. I played with it in a black and white conversion a little on the high key side and thought it looked good. I think its the tone I dont like in the sepia version. Mind you.. I'm a sucker for black and white

Raz

Thanks for your time and efforts, Lynn.

If you saved any of your trials, I'd be glad if you could email them to me.

Thanks
Raz