Bernie Williams @ Madison Square Park

mjordanphoto

Some older shots (from last summer), but still some of my favorites. Again, C&C is greatly appreciated. For those who don't know, Bernie Williams used to play centerfield for the New York Yankees, and he's also an incredibly talented Latin guitarist - I happened to stumble upon the concert while waiting in line at Shake Shack - and being a huge Yankee fan, it was a great experience for me!

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ThatCanonGuy

I'm not that fond of the framing in the first two... show more of him. In #5 I'd show his head... anyway, I bet it was a great experience! Seeing a player off the field is always fun.

Go Red Sox! D

Molotov Everything

I think the issue with 2 3 & 4 is they don't show Bernie Williams playing guitar exactly. They either show Bernie, or they show a guitar. Shot 2 could be anybody playing that guitar, and 3 and 4 could be Bernie Williams, I don't know, carrying a duffel bag. I think it really needs his face and the guitar (even if you just get the body and cut off part of the neck) to work.

mjordanphoto

Thanks for the input and criticisms - I really appreciate the thoughts. I think some of the other shots in the gallery show things a bit better - I can totally see where the the criticism of "it could be anyone" comes from.

I really see where you're coming from with #5 - for some reason it never bothered me until you said something... and now it's all I can see! Well, that's what a different perspective gives you!

Anyway - thanks for the responses! Definitely gives me a better perspective for the next time out.