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karlabbottkarlabbott Registered Users Posts: 401 Major grins
edited June 15, 2011 in Street and Documentary
#1:

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#2:

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Karl Abbott
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited June 15, 2011
    I don't mean to be harsh, but #1 has nothing in focus, no clear subject and is rather flat. Frankly, I'd toss it. #2 has decent tonality and the neon sign adds a nice graphic touch. What's missing for me is some action inside. The people we see are rather ghost-like--I'm guessing you used a very long exposure. If there were some people close enough to the window that we could see them interacting clearly, that would make all the difference.
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  • karlabbottkarlabbott Registered Users Posts: 401 Major grins
    edited June 15, 2011
    Honest, candid feedback is something that I've always appreciated on this forum.

    Thank you for your comments -- I'll definitely think on those for the next time that I get a chance to do this type of photography.

    Karl
    Karl Abbott
    http://www.kabbottphoto.com/
    http://blog.kabbottphoto.com/
    Twitter: @kabbottphoto
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