Flower Closeup

senorjax

Does this do anything for anybody?

Cornflake

Yes, but it's almost too minimal to work. Also, there's an odd section on the far right that looks as if you stitched the shot.

Don

senorjax

I see what you're looking at Don. It's so soft over there that it's hard to tell that it's shadows between petals. It does look like a couple layers got shifted out of phase. Here's a slightly different version, with a border, that may add some definition to the overall look.

Richard

I'd like to see a little more definition in the upper third of the frame.

Cornflake

senorjax, whatever irregularity I was seeing in the first version isn't there now, and it doesn't look like you edited it, so maybe I was hallucinating.

DaddyO

For me it does. I think it is quite nice. Nicely balanced composition neatly crafted processing