My Son's Girlfriend

Zanotti

Mary Lee:




I don't know about the hands. I was trying to copy a pose I saw in a video and I don't know if it worked.

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Mitchell

Your lighting looks pretty good here, but I don't care for the positioning of her hand.

I also find the crop too tight (and I like tight crops). I need more room under her chin. She's also just too centered in the frame with this aspect ratio. Do you have any looser crops or was this done in camera?

Svennie

Lighting looks good!
You could try a square crop: this way the eyes draw much more attention and the hand not so much (imho ;-)

zoomer

Pose and crop aren't the best....but that doesn't make her any less cute....I can see the personality from here .
Lighting looks good.

Yaflyyadie

Crop is too tight at the bottom, maybe square will fix it. No matter what, the eyes take you straight to the subject.
Good lighting.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!