New bike shot

nw scoutnw scout Registered Users Posts: 256 Major grins
edited July 26, 2011 in Sports
Had an idea for a new shot for my portfolio, and this is what I came up with.

megan-final2-copy-L.jpg

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  • JeroenJeroen Registered Users Posts: 447 Major grins
    edited July 23, 2011
    Nice photo. Cool bike too :-)
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  • puzzledpaulpuzzledpaul Registered Users Posts: 1,621 Major grins
    edited July 23, 2011
    Nicely done, but little sense of movement, imo - is this what you were after?

    (A bit like shots of prop driven aircraft / choppers without blur on the 'whirly bits' )

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  • basfltbasflt Registered Users Posts: 1,882 Major grins
    edited July 23, 2011
    there is no movement - the bicyclist is tired

    i would have corrected the horizon-angle a bit as it looks incorrect IMO
    that would also give more angle to the road
    [enhancing the effect of slow speed ( climbing ) ]
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  • JSPhotographyJSPhotography Registered Users Posts: 552 Major grins
    edited July 25, 2011
    At first I didn't like it becouse the rider was going out of the frame. But the more i look at it the more I like it. There are a lot of things that are not done by the rules but it has a lot of feeling/emotion. I like the exposure, looks like some HDR work, maybe a little fill light. I like it.
  • fibredrivefibredrive Registered Users Posts: 46 Big grins
    edited July 25, 2011
    very nice!
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  • toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
    edited July 26, 2011
    Concept is good, composition not so much.

    Too much sky with primary & secondary subjects on right side of frame.

    My guess would be with the bike on the right and building behind him on he left to balance composition

    Perfectly exposed as with all your other shots.

    All IMO
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  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited July 26, 2011
    torags wrote: »
    My guess would be with the bike on the right and building behind him on he left to balance composition

    HIM!?!? Seriously. See your optomitrist:D.
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  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited July 26, 2011
    Columbia River Gorge, right? I like it. The horizon does need to be levelled though.
    John :
    Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
    D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.
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