Beach Vacation...

cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
edited July 28, 2011 in People
A quick shot from this morning...

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Chad - www.brberrys.com
If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.

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  • Bryce WilsonBryce Wilson Registered Users Posts: 1,586 Major grins
    edited July 23, 2011
    I can see the disappointment on her face without even seeing her face. Nice!
  • VayCayMomVayCayMom Registered Users Posts: 1,870 Major grins
    edited July 24, 2011
    awww poor kid !
    Trudy
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  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited July 25, 2011
    Thanks! She got over it when teh sun came out an hour later.clap.gif
    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
  • NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
    edited July 26, 2011
    I like it! The processing is interesting, cleanly done. Often it is the interior or the exterior which is shadowy, but here they are equal. So there's a bit of frisson, something offbeat.

    Nice narrative conveyed.

    I love looking at rainy windows. If I were her I would be lost in reverie!

    I would like to have a look at it with (all) the horizontals horizontal, and (al)so possibly slightly differently cropped. A little more intimacy with the subject could be effective.

    Neil
    "Snow. Ice. Slow!" "Half-winter. Half-moon. Half-asleep!"

    http://www.behance.net/brosepix
  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited July 26, 2011
    Great catch. Try croping horizontal observing the rule of thirds for subject placement. I think it would increase the emotion quite abit. Its a keeper for the family alb!!
    Charles
    www.cameraone.biz
  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited July 26, 2011
    Thanks guys!

    The crop suggestion seems to be universal, this better?

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    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
  • NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
    edited July 26, 2011
    Maybe a step too far? Keep (a fraction) more of that interesting window, I feel (it might need a bit more space above the girl to retain the "big world outside" idea). I'd also experiment (very cautiously) with a vignette to isolate/concentrate the feeling and the subject.

    I'm still made a bit seasick by the lean...

    Neil
    "Snow. Ice. Slow!" "Half-winter. Half-moon. Half-asleep!"

    http://www.behance.net/brosepix
  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited July 26, 2011
    Never one to pass on an opportunity to learn ...

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    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
  • NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
    edited July 27, 2011
    That'll do me!thumb.gif Nice work!

    Neil
    "Snow. Ice. Slow!" "Half-winter. Half-moon. Half-asleep!"

    http://www.behance.net/brosepix
  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2011
    Thanks for the critique!
    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
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