I like it! The processing is interesting, cleanly done. Often it is the interior or the exterior which is shadowy, but here they are equal. So there's a bit of frisson, something offbeat.
Nice narrative conveyed.
I love looking at rainy windows. If I were her I would be lost in reverie!
I would like to have a look at it with (all) the horizontals horizontal, and (al)so possibly slightly differently cropped. A little more intimacy with the subject could be effective.
Great catch. Try croping horizontal observing the rule of thirds for subject placement. I think it would increase the emotion quite abit. Its a keeper for the family alb!!
Maybe a step too far? Keep (a fraction) more of that interesting window, I feel (it might need a bit more space above the girl to retain the "big world outside" idea). I'd also experiment (very cautiously) with a vignette to isolate/concentrate the feeling and the subject.
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Nice narrative conveyed.
I love looking at rainy windows. If I were her I would be lost in reverie!
I would like to have a look at it with (all) the horizontals horizontal, and (al)so possibly slightly differently cropped. A little more intimacy with the subject could be effective.
Neil
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The crop suggestion seems to be universal, this better?
If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
I'm still made a bit seasick by the lean...
Neil
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If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
Neil
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If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.