Dusk in Dublin

SillKickingSillKicking Registered Users Posts: 65 Big grins
edited July 29, 2011 in Street and Documentary
(1)
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(2)
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(3)
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(4)
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Camera: Leica M3 ELC (1965)
Lens: Leitz Summarit 5cm f1.5
Film: EFKE KB 50 @50
Developer: Rodinal 1:50
Marc

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Comments

  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited July 27, 2011
    Nice tonalities in these. I'd straighten #1 and #4. #2 looks familiar--have you posted other shots from the same POV? I feel as if I had been there before. lol3.gif
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  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited July 29, 2011
    I appreciate what you're trying to do with each of these, but I think they're better ideas than images. For my taste, the first is just too disengaged from the couple; you needed to be closer. The second has real potential, but is too cluttered on the left and so we don't get as much as we should from the young woman looking back. And the third and fourth need something more - both are great settings/situations, that could have benefited from your waiting for additional elements. Wonderful exposure and tonality in three and four, btw. :-)
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