A day at the park

cbrewercbrewer Registered Users Posts: 2 Beginner grinner
edited August 9, 2011 in People
Any c&c would be great!!

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  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited August 8, 2011
    CC is dependent on what the purpose of the print is. As a general capture you've got great color and clarity, congrats on that. The couple is showing emotion and the smiles make one wonder what they are thinking so you've created emotion. As a portrait for my tastes this falls short in that the colors detract from their faces and I prefer to see more of a closeness between the couple. More of a close up as the legs don't contribute to the photo. Hope that helps and please take from it what you want.
  • cbrewercbrewer Registered Users Posts: 2 Beginner grinner
    edited August 8, 2011
    Thank you for your input, it was just an "in the moment" shot I took. I will keep your advice in mind next time I am shooting a portrait. I am always looking for ways to improve.
  • ADMIT PhotographyADMIT Photography Registered Users Posts: 431 Major grins
    edited August 9, 2011
    Maybe something like this? I hope you don't mind.

    1. I cropped it closer
    2. Added some contrast
    3. Blured out the background a bit using the lens blur option in photoshop.

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