Mega Challenge 13 Entry C&C

kwickers

Hello, I entered this image after some other attempts based on a scence from Sin City. C&C welcome.

#1 "On the run"
<a href="http://photos.keithwickersham.com/Photography/Close-Up-and-Personal/17853166_zrHkMT#1426734888_4jssKJR-A-LB&quot; title=""><img src="http://photos.keithwickersham.com/Photography/Close-Up-and-Personal/i-4jssKJR/0/M/frankmillerscene-M.jpg&quot; title="" alt=""></a>


#2 My First attempt
<a href="http://photos.keithwickersham.com/Photography/Close-Up-and-Personal/17853166_zrHkMT#1426786507_bsM7WQP-A-LB&quot; title=""><img src="http://photos.keithwickersham.com/Photography/Close-Up-and-Personal/i-bsM7WQP/0/M/gun-3-bw-2-M.jpg&quot; title="" alt=""></a>



Thanks Keith

torrbrae

Like the setup and wording in #1, just find the blue ?ticket distracting. In #2 feel the gun is at the wrong angle, and need some wording to explain - or maybe that can be done with the title?

Froch

Fun!

kwickers

I turned the passport into B&W. I think it does help. I may shoot some more (maybe more bling in the image would make it interesting) it is early still. Forget #2 it was a concept under work.

sapphire73

I like it!

richtersl

I like it! Do you have a shot that shows the passport cover? I'd just like to see it for comparison.

sapphire73

I agree that the passport cover might be more easily recognized...

kwickers

new image(s): same theme.



EXIF

dlscott56

Very nice! I like your current entry best of these.