MC First try

dlscott56

Hey everyone. Just getting back from vacation and don't have too much time to work on this. So ... here's my first try. I'm not real thrilled with the processing yet but would like to know what you think so far? Should I keep at this idea?

Thanks in advance for you input.

lkbart

I like the feel of this, the "eyes" look purely evil! Might replace "gonin'" with "goin'". Only other possible concern would be that the left side of the figure doesn't stand out from the background very well - the gun seems a bit muted, but that could be intentional; otherwise I like the contrast. (& I sure wouldn't go - just sat through some of this raging weather for the past half hour!)

dlscott56

lkbart wrote: »

I like the feel of this, the "eyes" look purely evil! Might replace "gonin'" with "goin'". Only other possible concern would be that the left side of the figure doesn't stand out from the background very well - the gun seems a bit muted, but that could be intentional; otherwise I like the contrast. (& I sure wouldn't go - just sat through some of this raging weather for the past half hour!)

Oops, trying to get some of it done too quickly. I'll fix the typo tomorrow. Thanks for the input.

tinamarie52

Since he is already outside, does the comment make sense? I have a clue about FM, so take my thoughts with a big shaker of salt. I agree with Lillian about the guy blending in with the bg on the left. I love the look of the rain.

Chris