MC13 - C&C Please

WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
edited August 22, 2011 in The Dgrin Challenges
What do you think? Is the story strong enough? How about the processing? Title?

I Got Yer Dog
Mega13LostDog-L.jpg

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  • torrbraetorrbrae Registered Users Posts: 203 Major grins
    edited August 22, 2011
    Like the processing. Just not sure the story holds - can get the gist of the story, except dog does not look as if stolen. Feel hold better if had "baddy" holding dog, or maybe the dog in a cage, ie something to make it look as if dog held against its will.
  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited August 22, 2011
    Thanks, torrbrae! I think I will not have much time today to work on another idea, so I may end up going with this one in spite of its weak story.

    Maybe a change in title will tie it together better. Does it loo better with the black BG?

    #2 I Seen Yer Dog
    Mega13LostDogBlack1-L.jpg
  • angevin1angevin1 Registered Users Posts: 3,403 Major grins
    edited August 22, 2011
    I think the Story Sticks and is well executed. Go for it!
    tom wise
  • WhatSheSawWhatSheSaw Registered Users Posts: 2,221 Major grins
    edited August 22, 2011
    Thanks, Tom!
  • slpollettslpollett Registered Users Posts: 1,223 Major grins
    edited August 22, 2011
    I like it, too!

    Sherry
  • tinamarie52tinamarie52 Registered Users Posts: 954 Major grins
    edited August 22, 2011
    I got it right away! It works well.

    Chris
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