Looking Out

evanlavineevanlavine Registered Users Posts: 72 Big grins
edited September 12, 2011 in Street and Documentary
Hi everyone!

Glad to meet you all here - relatively a new grinner here and am looking forward to making some new friends and checking out your photos!

Cheers,
Evan

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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited August 31, 2011
    Welcome wave.gif

    more detail/context here would work better for me.
    Benjamin
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  • BendrBendr Registered Users Posts: 665 Major grins
    edited September 1, 2011
    I like it! leaves me wondering who she is, and where she is.
    thumb.gif

    Thanks for sharing!

    Ben
    http://bendr.smugmug.com
  • RSLRSL Registered Users Posts: 839 Major grins
    edited September 1, 2011
    Evan, You've got the right idea. Keep working at it. A quick flip through Robert Frank's The Americans might help to crystalize what you're after.
    Russ Lewis
    www.FineArtSnaps.com
  • evanlavineevanlavine Registered Users Posts: 72 Big grins
    edited September 1, 2011
    thanks guys - it is great to meet you 3.
    cheers then!
    evan
  • rainbowrainbow Registered Users Posts: 2,765 Major grins
    edited September 2, 2011
    Welcome to DGrin and our forum.

    Was the sharpness/processing on the main subject deliberate? My initial reaction was that sharper would be better, but now am uncertain... I like the blur/ambiguity of what she is staring at outside.
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited September 9, 2011
    Welcome to Dgrin wave.gif. Given that she is looking away from the camera, I'm not sure that sharper would be better here. OTOH, unplugging the shadows in her hair and neck might show some contour that would add presence. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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  • moose135moose135 Registered Users Posts: 1,420 Major grins
    edited September 10, 2011
    Welcome aboard, Evan. As a fellow Long Islander, I've ridden the LIRR enough to recognize that first photo. Well done.
    The Moose is Loose!
    http://www.moose135photography.com
  • evanlavineevanlavine Registered Users Posts: 72 Big grins
    edited September 11, 2011
    thanks guys! Glad this could lead to a bit of discussion! I liked reading your thoughts and comments rainbow and RSL. Moose, I am so tired of them trains, but it is part of LI commuting, eh? In Bay Shore, you?
  • moose135moose135 Registered Users Posts: 1,420 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2011
    At least I haven't had to commute into NYC every day...

    I'm in Syosset, Evan.
    The Moose is Loose!
    http://www.moose135photography.com
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