DSS 84 - C&C Please

WhatSheSaw

So does this convey the concept? How about the processing - any preference? Any nits?

#1 I Can See!



#2


#3 A little less contrast

richtersl

They're all nice but what's distracting is the motion blur caused by his mouth. The frameless glasses also are difficult to make out upon initial glance.

I really like where you're going with this and am wondering how easy would it be to do a reshoot with him or someone else putting on a pair of framed glasses.

WhatSheSaw

Thanks for the comment, Linda. How critical do you think the BG is to the image? The store will be closed until Tuesday, so I won't be able to reshoot there.

I may be able to get my model to cooperate with a reshoot using an old pair of rimmed glasses.

GretaPics

I agree with Linda - At first glance I needed the context of the store to understand the image...a darker frame would help I think. I really like the concept though for this theme. GP

richtersl

I don't think the background critical. It's nice, but I don't think you need to shoot in an eyeglass shop to make this image work.