1st football shots of the season

Kikoprice

I decided to really give the monopod of light and technology a shot. Here are my 1st attempts.

High School

#1


1 mississippi. 2 mississippi. 3 mississppi...flash recycling.:thumb

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#3


#4


#5 {some ghosting, but couldnt decide if I liked it or not}


These are from the 1st game of the night, no flash, it was at sunset and I was saving my batteries.

#6


#7



This is saturdays shots from a JC game. Bigger and faster guys...

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#10

Kikoprice

A little C & C , Please ? I can take it.....

donek

The flash seems a bit too strong on the flashed shots.

The colors don't really pop on 6 & 7 and the framing on 7 is wrong. Too much dead space on the right.

8 & 9 seem to have a bit of a tilt to the right and 9 needs more pop to the colors.

I'm better at pointing out negatives, so I apologize. The really positive thing I see is faces.

Kikoprice

Thanks Sean, thats what I was looking for.

Im still testing the flash under the mono pod. Im not sure if I had the flash compensation bumped or not.

6,7,9 were all taken the same time of day on friday and saturday, shadowed part of the field near sundown. I was afraid of makiing the blue field too blue.

The tilted horizon....got it.

On #7, tell me what you think is wrong with the framing. Im guessing he is too centered.

I cant improve without C&C, so thank you again!

donek

Kikoprice wrote: »

Thanks Sean, thats what I was looking for.

Im still testing the flash under the mono pod. Im not sure if I had the flash compensation bumped or not.

6,7,9 were all taken the same time of day on friday and saturday, shadowed part of the field near sundown. I was afraid of makiing the blue field too blue.

The tilted horizon....got it.

On #7, tell me what you think is wrong with the framing. Im guessing he is too centered.

I cant improve without C&C, so thank you again!

just crop 7 tight on the ball carrier and the tackler. everything else is extraneous.