(DSS #85 Orton) A Long Way To Go...

cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
edited September 11, 2011 in The Dgrin Challenges
This one is a real stretch for me. Here are the first tries shooting a magnolia - C&C very welcome.

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Chad - www.brberrys.com
If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.

Comments

  • red_zonered_zone Registered Users Posts: 533 Major grins
    edited September 9, 2011
    Hmmm... I like your #1, it seems to be the older Orton style and has a nice glow to it, but I'd try for a closer macro and get only one set of those blooms to focus, even in the "sharp" one, and then merge the unfocused to get the glow.

    #3 is appealing too.
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  • SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited September 9, 2011
    I agree with Jake - may need a closer shot to bring out the buds more.
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  • cbbrcbbr Registered Users Posts: 755 Major grins
    edited September 9, 2011
    Thanks!
    Chad - www.brberrys.com
    If I post it, please tell me how to make it better. My fragile ego can take it.
  • sapphire73sapphire73 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 1,976 moderator
    edited September 10, 2011
    I think Jake's advice regarding #1 is good, and I think that shot has potential. Good luck with it!

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  • tinamarie52tinamarie52 Registered Users Posts: 954 Major grins
    edited September 11, 2011
    Concedntrate on the effect in #1 with magnolia reshoots. I like where you are going with this.

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