First critique, we want to see the picture not some stinking link!!!!
That said the comp would have been improved by framing or cropping it more towards frame llefy and giveing it more room on the right where its looking. I would have toned down the brightness of the vegetation in the foreground so that it would be less distracting. .
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That said the comp would have been improved by framing or cropping it more towards frame llefy and giveing it more room on the right where its looking. I would have toned down the brightness of the vegetation in the foreground so that it would be less distracting. .
http://behret.smugmug.com/ NANPA member
How many photographers does it take to change a light bulb? 50. One to change the bulb, and forty-nine to say, "I could have done that better!"
Korandoke