First E Session in a while

TGAllen

On the campus of St John's University in St Cloud, Minnesota.

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Erbeman

I'm loving 1 and 3.

TGAllen

Thanks Russ. I appreciate the feedback.

Aspecto5

K, so this is just my opinion.

1. My eyes go straight to the boats. A little bit of a blur like the trees that overhang have, would probably let my eyes be pulled more to the couple.
2. I would've wiped away some of the softness on the couple.
3. Somewhat of the same thing. That wall of green overpowers the couple. Love the comp and not sure what could help. Maybe a less vignette on the couples side.....hmmmm...
I love the rest of them.

Like I said....just my opinion. :B

TGAllen

Aspecto5 wrote: »

K, so this is just my opinion.

1. My eyes go straight to the boats. A little bit of a blur like the trees that overhang have, would probably let my eyes be pulled more to the couple.
2. I would've wiped away some of the softness on the couple.
3. Somewhat of the same thing. That wall of green overpowers the couple. Love the comp and not sure what could help. Maybe a less vignette on the couples side.....hmmmm...
I love the rest of them.

Like I said....just my opinion. :B

Thanks for your opinion! I have many more shots of these so I will play around with them and see what I can come up with. That ivy wall was beautiful and I've been wondering what to do with it. I have it soft in some shots, sharp in others. I wish I could see what others could do with it...

smurfy

One, three and six are fabulous. I like the boats too. Great compositions and leading lines on all of them. Love the wall and the ivy and the processing.

To be honest, the leg kicked back in four looks really fake. She wasn't a good enough actress to pull it off.

I'd love to see more of the natural interactions without so many kissing shots. This is just a personal preference... The kissing shots seem more special and less contrived when they are fewer in number. And if they are not puckering.

Really nice set overall. Thank you for sharing it.

TGAllen

smurfy wrote: »

One, three and six are fabulous. I like the boats too. Great compositions and leading lines on all of them. Love the wall and the ivy and the processing.

To be honest, the leg kicked back in four looks really fake. She wasn't a good enough actress to pull it off.

I'd love to see more of the natural interactions without so many kissing shots. This is just a personal preference... The kissing shots seem more special and less contrived when they are fewer in number. And if they are not puckering.

Really nice set overall. Thank you for sharing it.

Thanks Smurfy! Great feedback.

zoomer

I just looked at 6 photos of this couple....and couldn't pick them out of a lineup....half joking . Lots of kissing....
I am sure you have some of their faces.

I actually like all of them creatively. 2 looks too bright on the faces.

TGAllen

zoomer wrote: »

I just looked at 6 photos of this couple....and couldn't pick them out of a lineup....half joking . Lots of kissing....
I am sure you have some of their faces.

I actually like all of them creatively. 2 looks too bright on the faces.

Thanks Zoomer. I actually have quite a few with their faces, I guess I just picked out the ones I liked to share... here's a few more with their faces.



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