My 4th Wedding how'd I do?

trackaddict

This was my 4th wedding over all, I was using a D200 with 17-55 F2.8, D40x with 18-200mm and D70 with a 50mm. I loved the 17-55mm and felt like it gave me a much more professional sharpness than the 18-200 usually does. Plus the F2.8 with zoom is awesome.









I liked this photo a lot but there's something off and I just can't seem to put my tongue on it, simple tighter crop?





Let me know how well or horrible I did, again it was only my 4th wedding so I'm still figuring things out.

innershell

I am no wedding photographer, so take my feedback with a grain of salt. But many of your shots, you could have stepped back or zoomed out a bit to get more of the bride in the frame or capture more of the environment.

The one where the bride and groom kissing outside the church doors would have been better from farther out so that we can see what's going on with the men in uniform.

trackaddict

innershell wrote: »

I am no wedding photographer, so take my feedback with a grain of salt. But many of your shots, you could have stepped back or zoomed out a bit to get more of the bride in the frame or capture more of the environment.

The one where the bride and groom kissing outside the church doors would have been better from farther out so that we can see what's going on with the men in uniform.

I actually have a bunch of picture zoomed out with the Marines holding the swords over them only issue was it was a fast happening thing, and the while the pictures is fine it just doesn't look lined up here take a look.

innershell

trackaddict wrote: »

I actually have a bunch of picture zoomed out with the Marines holding the swords over them only issue was it was a fast happening thing, and the while the pictures is fine it just doesn't look lined up here take a look.

Personally, I think this is a much more interesting capture.

Sean Ealy

I second that. I think this last shot works much better.