Untitled again

bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
edited September 21, 2011 in Street and Documentary
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  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited September 21, 2011
    No need for a title. But a crop might be in order - maybe an inch off the bottom and up the left side to maintain proportions, bring it all closer, but maintain all the elements. Just sayin'
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited September 21, 2011
    Agree--but I'd also try to get it a little less centered while you're at it. Nice interplay of lines, shapes and light. I like it.
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited September 21, 2011
    No problem with me gents, in fact I did do a rework.
    Added some took some away, can't do much about centered without losing way to much.

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  • RSLRSL Registered Users Posts: 839 Major grins
    edited September 21, 2011
    I agree with Richard, especially about the "little less centered." The gal needs more space on the right to walk into. The arrow, of course, is critical, so if you crop you'll have to leave it alone. But a crop? I don't see how you can avoid having the picture end up as a vertical if you give her much more space on the right. Even as a square you're going to have to remove some of the important overhead wires. The problem is that this picture cries out to be a horizontal. It's pretty darn good as it is, Ben. I'd vote for leaving it alone.
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