August 20th, 2011 Wedding
It's been a while since I shared... sorry! I did shoot two weddings in August, so here's one of them.
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More here: http://www.photography-by-cat.com/Weddings/Wedding-Portfolio/2011-08-20-Nicole-Justin/13595226_8j4stT
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More here: http://www.photography-by-cat.com/Weddings/Wedding-Portfolio/2011-08-20-Nicole-Justin/13595226_8j4stT
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Ack I totally missed the person! I cloned them out of most of the other images, but somehow missed this one, stupid white blending in... yes it was a golf course. Poplar Creek.
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I'm here to learn so please feel free to give me constructive criticism to help me become the photographer I desire to be.
Couple of nits.
1. You missed the focus...the nostrils are in focus, her eyes are not...depth of field was a little shallow. The camera appears to have picked up the wrong focal point.
2. Really like this one.
4. Yep, clone the guys out...like was said before. Has a nice feel to it...emotion and interaction.
5. Fix that slight tilt...it's almost hidden by your water mark...looks like it happened because you didn't want you in the reflection to appear in the door. Something else you might want to consider...make the foreground one color...get rid of that sunny triangle cutting through the grass. Clone and tone in some grass from the shaded area.
6. I like this one...the classic just before the reward shot...she looks like she's about to get something special...nice capture. More of this kind...
9. Looks like she's a little stiff...not much emotion. Nice picture, though.
10. Please fix her belly bulge. Not flattering. Other than that, 10 is nice.
11. Same as 10...has more emotion than 9. His hand on her hip would have helped a lot to hide that belly bulge. Having his hand in his pocket...why. Look at where his hand is in 9...makes a world of difference in how her belly looks.
Just some thoughts as I looked over your set.
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7 seems way oversaturated (which I don't mind for the blues, but the oranges are cranked a bit much) . I suspect the lady nearest has a white shirt on, but it looks blue to me due to the processing. I am sure it is too late to make any changes, but you might want to dial that one in a bit.
I love your work Cat!
Thanks Heather! And yeah I cranked the **** out of the saturation on 7 so I could get the cool looking sky... but good point on the back lady in the white shirt, she was wearing white! The bride liked it so much that we used it as a faded background image on one of her album pages.
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nice work, some do look a little saturated, but that was already discussed.
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