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bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
edited October 8, 2011 in Street and Documentary
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  • bdcolenbdcolen Registered Users Posts: 3,804 Major grins
    edited October 3, 2011
    Excellent, Ben. FWIW, I'd boost the contrast some on the shadow, and burn her in a bit. But it's really nice.
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited October 3, 2011
    There's a lot I like about this one. The bright woman on the dark shadow, the shadow of the tree. Still, I think there's too much sidewalk at the bottom--I'd play around with a panoramic crop and see what pops out.
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited October 4, 2011
    bdcolen wrote: »
    Excellent, Ben. FWIW, I'd boost the contrast some on the shadow, and burn her in a bit. But it's really nice.
    Richard wrote: »
    There's a lot I like about this one. The bright woman on the dark shadow, the shadow of the tree. Still, I think there's too much sidewalk at the bottom--I'd play around with a panoramic crop and see what pops out.

    Thanks Gents.
    Will work on a redo with your suggestions in mind.
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited October 4, 2011
    bfjr wrote: »
    Thanks Gents.
    Will work on a redo with your suggestions in mind.

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited October 4, 2011
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited October 6, 2011
    Richard wrote: »
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    Thanks Richard
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  • CCoopCCoop Registered Users Posts: 511 Major grins
    edited October 6, 2011
    The crop really works for me, too. Nice B/W work!


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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited October 8, 2011
    CCoop wrote: »
    The crop really works for me, too. Nice B/W work!


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    Appreciate that, thanks
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