How Will I Look?

evanlavineevanlavine Registered Users Posts: 72 Big grins
edited October 5, 2011 in Street and Documentary
Regards,

Evan

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited October 5, 2011
    Good capture, but I think the processing could be improved. It's very low contrast and I don't think the tinting adds anything.
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  • lizzard_nyclizzard_nyc Registered Users Posts: 4,056 Major grins
    edited October 5, 2011
    Same for me. No go on the tint, but also I think you missed the shot. I get what you are going for (I think) but the lady w/ the wheelchair is cut off and the little girl doesn't really seem to be looking at her.
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  • evanlavineevanlavine Registered Users Posts: 72 Big grins
    edited October 5, 2011
    Hey guys! Thanks for the feedback on this. Agreed with tinting, was just trying out something different. I don't know if I fully agree with you lizzard (I do up to point with missing part of the shot - shooting at 1.4 at night I had wished I had focused more on the girl and not the wheelchair itself). I do not think the girl needs to be looking at the elderly woman in this one the only reason is because surrounding her all around are women in all varying stages of life and size - it is more about all then any one single woman - at least for me. But of course your criticism is valid and I appreciate it and will think more about it :)

    cheers,

    evan
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