#50 Hi Desert

bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
edited October 24, 2005 in The Dgrin Challenges
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  • adrian_kadrian_k Registered Users Posts: 557 Major grins
    edited October 20, 2005
    nice range of colours and it's well exposed.

    but the composition doesn't grab me, there's no subject/point of interest. Maybe if we could see more of the fence...

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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited October 20, 2005
    I agree with Adrian
    adrian_k wrote:
    nice range of colours and it's well exposed.

    but the composition doesn't grab me, there's no subject/point of interest. Maybe if we could see more of the fence...
    Colors are lovely (and lively) (maybe a tad too dark to my taste but this is sooo subjective), but the composition... ne_nau.gif
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  • skufukuskufuku Registered Users Posts: 51 Big grins
    edited October 21, 2005
    Cropping the hills out of the backround will focus more attention on the colors in the grass. A little adjustment in PS might bring the colors out more as well.
  • mwgricemwgrice Registered Users Posts: 383 Major grins
    edited October 21, 2005
    skufuku wrote:
    Cropping the hills out of the backround will focus more attention on the colors in the grass. A little adjustment in PS might bring the colors out more as well.
    I took the liberty of playing with your image a bit. I overdid the red, probably by a lot, and I'm not sure if the cropping helped, but as you can see there's a fair amount you can do with photoshop to emphasize the colors more.

    Assuming I managed to attach the image successfully, of course.
  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited October 21, 2005
    thanks everyone for tips and comments thumb.gif


    Mwgrice you beat me to it ...... nice job thumb.gif ........ gives me something to go with!!
    Thank you
    I am going to redo it this weekend with your rework in mind and repost thumb.gif
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited October 22, 2005
    Hi Desert Redone and added something else
    Ok redid the 1st and added something that struck me as another possibility

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    a different approach ne_nau.gif
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  • mwgricemwgrice Registered Users Posts: 383 Major grins
    edited October 22, 2005
    Ooh, I really like the second shot.
  • melmel Registered Users Posts: 80 Big grins
    edited October 22, 2005
    Oooo... the bee! Definitely the bee.
    I like the first shot, but agree it lacks a particular focal point.

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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited October 23, 2005
    mwgrice wrote:
    Ooh, I really like the second shot.

    Yeah that's how it struck me when I 1st saw it, Might go with this one
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  • SnapHappySnapHappy Registered Users Posts: 328 Major grins
    edited October 24, 2005
    Yep the bee shot is the best.thumb.gif I like the fact that instead of trying to get many different colours in one shot that this concentrates on the yellow. The fact that you have two elements of yellow nature in the shot is :):
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited October 24, 2005
    Thanks all
    think I'll go with the bee, but what should I call it ne_nau.gif:D

    and ........... um "Crappy Yellow" won't work :lol4
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