Two girls and a Truck

RacinRandyRacinRandy Registered Users Posts: 187 Major grins
edited October 13, 2011 in Go Figure
Looking for C&C

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Sorry about the watermarks
Randy

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  • papadakapapadaka Registered Users Posts: 15 Big grins
    edited October 11, 2011
    Nice Chevy. Got any more images ? Please feel free to share.
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  • djamesdjames Registered Users Posts: 237 Major grins
    edited October 11, 2011
    Good idea for a start. a couple of nit-pics from my perspective. in photo #1. the streaks across the photo are very distracting. I am not a fan of hiding areolas with a hand or arm. if they must be hidden there are other more attractive ways. In photo #2. what looks like a red logo makes the model look like she has a wierd sunburn at first glance. Again the hiding does not come off looking attractive. Good looking models and great location and lighting. IMHO
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  • Aspecto5Aspecto5 Registered Users Posts: 311 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2011
    I'm not digging the vignetting in #1. I think this image has enough interest in its own composition without that adding to it. I kind of agree with the earlier comment about arm placement, but the girl on the hood has her arm and hand placed in a more natural way the the girl on the roof.
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  • JimKarczewskiJimKarczewski Registered Users Posts: 969 Major grins
    edited October 13, 2011
    Ditch the white Vignette. Really..

    Also, if you are going to put a logo across the image, do it with a little less opacity. As mentioned, it doesn't look like a logo on first view.. Looks like weird skin issues...
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