She looks relaxed and natural with you though, so that's a big plus. But overall, I'm with Bob on this one -- the photo is pretty flat. If you're going to have soft focus, you need more light in her eyes so that they still pop. The color is too orange for my taste, and the leaf growing into her head distracts me.
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What I like: The pose is nice, her smile is nice, the scarf is a nice touch.
What I don't like: Her shirt is blown out, the overall photo is not sharp at all, and quite flat (the photo doesn't "pop")
Is the original shot sharp and in focus? Perhaps you applied a treatment that affected the sharpness and pop of the original?
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Nice photo
I like her smile, but the hair over the eye bugs me.
Chuck Cassidy,
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Aperture Focus Photography
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