Recent Swim Shoot

Coleman PhotographyColeman Photography Registered Users Posts: 351 Major grins
edited October 27, 2011 in People
Hey All, Its been awhile since I have posted on here. Been super busy. Finally have some free time and thought I would share a few from a recent shoot!

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Comments

  • BilsenBilsen Registered Users Posts: 2,143 Major grins
    edited October 27, 2011
    Generally nice series with a pretty model.

    If there are nits to pick, #2 is gorgeous except for the small light differential on her right cheek.
    #4 is also beautiful and would be better if she had all of her fingers including the tips
    #5 seems a bit dark to me but I'm on a non- calibrated screen.

    That's pretty minor stuff for a solid set.
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  • tomnovytomnovy Registered Users Posts: 1,103 SmugMug Employee
    edited October 27, 2011
    Great session. For some reason all the details on her skin is lost. Is that compression?
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  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited October 27, 2011
    Like 4 and 5 the best.
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  • anonymouscubananonymouscuban Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 4,586 Major grins
    edited October 27, 2011
    I agree with Hack. #4 is best IMO. Pose, lighting and composition. Be nice is her fingers weren't cutoff but oh well. #5 is good too. The others have issue with posing, distracting blown highlights, etc.

    One thing though... they all lack detail, very soft. Some more than others. Is it a focus issue or compression/processing?
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  • Coleman PhotographyColeman Photography Registered Users Posts: 351 Major grins
    edited October 27, 2011
    Thanks everyone. As for the softnes I think it may be a combination of compression and pp. I tried a new skin technique on these and I'm not happy with it. On print though, they are sharp.
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