She is gorgeous and you did a great job of capturing her beauty. My only nitpick is the eyes and lips appear a little bit oversharpened for my taste.
"Photography is not about the thing photographed. It is about how that thing looks photographed." Garry Winogrand Avatar credit: photograph by Duane Michals-picture of me, 'Smash Palace' album
Great capture. I love the depth of the photo. I too was immediately distracted with the eyes in the small photo. Looking at the larger one, I see what you are saying. I wonder if you were to increase the size of your skin fix mask to get right up to the eyelashes so the skin just below her eyes and on her eyelids was the same texture as the rest of her fixed skin...may help. When it is viewed at smaller sizes, the original skin around her eyes makes creates an outline and it looks unnatural. Just a thought. Thanks for sharing your work.
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It is about how that thing looks photographed." Garry Winogrand
Avatar credit: photograph by Duane Michals- picture of me, 'Smash Palace' album
See the bigger version - click on the image. It is not oversharpened.
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