At the Window

briandelionbriandelion Registered Users Posts: 512 Major grins
edited October 30, 2011 in People
Some middle distance shots from the session I recently posted. As always, C&C much appreciated.

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"Photography is not about the thing photographed.
It is about how that thing looks photographed." Garry Winogrand

Avatar credit: photograph by Duane Michals- picture of me, 'Smash Palace' album

Comments

  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2011
    I really like these. I'll say however that, with respect to #3 & #4, I think the panties move the images into a different genre than the others. I'm not objecting to seeing the panties, just offering the observation.
    John :
    Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
    D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.
  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2011
    I agree with John, bottom part is too distracting
    Charles
    www.cameraone.biz
  • briandelionbriandelion Registered Users Posts: 512 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2011
    Hmmm... I see what you mean. Anyway, here's a quick wardrobe malfunction correction. Is this better?


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    "Photography is not about the thing photographed.
    It is about how that thing looks photographed." Garry Winogrand

    Avatar credit: photograph by Duane Michals- picture of me, 'Smash Palace' album
  • HackboneHackbone Registered Users Posts: 4,027 Major grins
    edited October 29, 2011
    Still leaves too much to the imagination.
    Charles
    www.cameraone.biz
  • RebelSolRebelSol Registered Users Posts: 43 Big grins
    edited October 30, 2011
    I agree with the others. Perhaps you could shift the knees to the left a bit to eliminate that issue.
  • briandelionbriandelion Registered Users Posts: 512 Major grins
    edited October 30, 2011
    Thanks for the suggestions. Taking comments and imaginations into consideration I think the fix will work. She didn't mention anything about it (only that she loved them all) although she picked others as her favorites. Her only negative was that she wished she had shown more variety of facial expression during the session.
    That issue aside, any comments on composition, lighting, etc?
    "Photography is not about the thing photographed.
    It is about how that thing looks photographed." Garry Winogrand

    Avatar credit: photograph by Duane Michals- picture of me, 'Smash Palace' album
  • IcebearIcebear Registered Users Posts: 4,015 Major grins
    edited October 30, 2011
    Can't really help you there. I just like them as is.
    John :
    Natural selection is responsible for every living thing that exists.
    D3s, D500, D5300, and way more glass than the wife knows about.
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