Austin skyline...

M38A1M38A1 Registered Users Posts: 1,317 Major grins
edited November 16, 2011 in Landscapes
My first real attempt at shooting a skyline scene.

Comment on how you do these and critique is welcomed. :-)

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  • GOLDENORFEGOLDENORFE Super Moderators Posts: 4,747 moderator
    edited November 13, 2011
    like it!!!!!! something i have not done.
    not sure about the bottom right corner though, too dead!
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  • kdogkdog Administrators Posts: 11,681 moderator
    edited November 14, 2011
    Beautiful scene, although I have to agree about the right lower area being awfully dark.
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  • M38A1M38A1 Registered Users Posts: 1,317 Major grins
    edited November 14, 2011
    Hmmm.... So here was my 'other' version, yet I thought the rock edge looked a bit odd. Any better than the first?

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  • redleashredleash Registered Users Posts: 3,840 Major grins
    edited November 14, 2011
    Nice one, Scott. I like the first version better. I need to get back up that way soon.

    Lauren
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  • Doug SolisDoug Solis Registered Users Posts: 1,190 Major grins
    edited November 15, 2011
    Great city scape, love the color and light effects. the only minor nics from me would be I would give just a bit more space above the highest skyscrapper and as to the right side I don't think it is a matter of being too dark but it is just too much negative space. I think if you had moved closer to the water thereby reducing this area it would have made for a stronger composition. Nice job.
  • novicesnappernovicesnapper Registered Users Posts: 445 Major grins
    edited November 16, 2011
    Lovely, I do miss that place. If that is Congress Ave Bridge, Austin City Limits use to be recorded in that general spot towards the right of where you're standing, outside. I have watched fireworks there several times, if it is. Thanks for the memories
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