Oke here we go, and remember this is my personal opinion for what it is worth.
P1)Shades on the face are not flattering the model, it emphasis the sides of the nose . Branch on the left side to explicit present.
P2) A very good shot, the best in this series... The emotions in the eyes, the hands in a protected position with a fence in the background all compliments the picture.
P3) Ok, but seems more a snapshot then a posed shot. Imagine if she would have been blowing some smoke while giving you a glance....
P4) Colors are just not right or the model must be very sick
P5) Sloppy shot, Why ? Look at the jacket just above the first button from the bottom. The right arm that disappears from the screen. And a nose shot, amplifying the nose openings. Sorry....
P6) Light is you biggest problem here especially on the face, secondly legs facing you (closer) will always be out of proportion. Try to have the legs less forward and at last the light pillar on right top does not help.
Overall I would say avoid harsh light (direct sunlight)
I hope I was not to hard for you (not the intend), I just wanted to be upfront and that is the intend here isn't.
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the dappled light in 1, 5, 6 are killing those shots for me. FInd all shade or brave the sun..don't go in the middle. 2 is the only one that is kinda working for me.
I like critiques. She wanted picked to shoot at the worst time possible and either it was to bright or the shade wasn't sufficient. I could sense she wasn't feeling it cause we originally planned a studio type shoot but her male model friend flaked as did the hair/make up person.
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P1)Shades on the face are not flattering the model, it emphasis the sides of the nose . Branch on the left side to explicit present.
P2) A very good shot, the best in this series... The emotions in the eyes, the hands in a protected position with a fence in the background all compliments the picture.
P3) Ok, but seems more a snapshot then a posed shot. Imagine if she would have been blowing some smoke while giving you a glance....
P4) Colors are just not right or the model must be very sick
P5) Sloppy shot, Why ? Look at the jacket just above the first button from the bottom. The right arm that disappears from the screen. And a nose shot, amplifying the nose openings. Sorry....
P6) Light is you biggest problem here especially on the face, secondly legs facing you (closer) will always be out of proportion. Try to have the legs less forward and at last the light pillar on right top does not help.
Overall I would say avoid harsh light (direct sunlight)
I hope I was not to hard for you (not the intend), I just wanted to be upfront and that is the intend here isn't.
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