Dss#90 "d"

DonRicklin

D is for dilapidated, dangerous, dingy, decadent, destitute.

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C&C welcome,

I have #2 posted to the CHallenge as my choice of the moment!



Don

DonRicklin

What! No responses at all.

Don


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lizzard_nyc

add "direct" and "demanding"


I like #4 very much for dilapidated.

The B*W you posted looks pretty flat to me, just fyi and the others don't grab my attention like #4 does.

Kinkajou

+1. #4 stood out to me as well. The simple lines/angles draw the eye into the image, making it stronger than the rest.

VisualXpressions

Okay Don,

I'm really not feeling it... the images look to cluttered to me, no real center of focus except maybe #1 even still it kind of takes over the whole picture... If I were shooting these buildings, I would concentrate on windows, doors, close ups, wide angles and further away shots of the whole place... different perspectives... I would walk all around shooting different facades and angles... and I always like to fix the distortion in photoshop squaring some of the angles if possible... #4 might have some potential... anyway for what it's worth... You probably did all that stuff and decided these 4 were your best...

Just trying to give more feedback when I have the time...

DonRicklin

Here is an LR Lens Correction Tilt-Shift version of #4:

#5


I am going to post it as my current updated challenge piece.

Further C&C welcome,
Don

divamum

#4 was my choice too - I like the rework.

DonRicklin

Thanks for looking and commenting, divamum.

Thank you, also, Liz, Kinkajou and VisualXpressions for pointing the way!



Don

DsrtVW

2 works for me like the color better than B&W

lkbart

I also like the reworked #4 but wonder what it would look like if the saturation was dropped, like an old faded photo.

DonRicklin

lkbart wrote: »

I also like the reworked #4 but wonder what it would look like if the saturation was dropped, like an old faded photo.

Try the less saturated look:






Don