Brought To You By The Letter D
divmedic4
Registered Users Posts: 160 Major grins
My original thoughts were Daughter, Ducks, Dog or Dock. Since the daughter won't be home for Thanksgiving until after the deadline and DsrtVW beat me to the punch on ducks, I present Dog(s) and Dock(s) for you opinions and suggestions.
1)
2)
3)
4)
1)
2)
3)
4)
Canon 7D, Sigma 17-70, Sigma 70-200 2.8 OS, EF 50 1.8 II, 430EXII
Tom
Tom
0
Comments
#1 - Lovely landscape but the setting sun and the light on the water pull my eye from the dock.
#2 - My eye focuses more on the dock here and the sky above - and warm light on the water below - complement it nicely!
#3 - Like the DOF, texture, expression and composition here. It seems to convey intelligence, loyalty, and attentiveness.
#4 - Great, expression here and gorgeous silky coat, but the framing feels a bit tight on the bottom.
Hope this is helpful!
Gretchen
My SmugMug Galleries
Tom
There is no rule that you cant use the same subject. I had thought of Dogs and Docks but had not gotten to those yet.
Like #2 for the dock. Better comp and subject
and #4 for the dog better expression
http://kadvantage.smugmug.com/
#2 and #3 work the best here, I think, and I'd plump for #2 out of these because in #3 I want more eyes - with him (?her) looking away from camera, I don't feel entirely engaged with the dog. #2 feels more like a "complete" image.
From my K-9 Ranch:
One more thought re #2 would be to boost the saturation in the sky a bit, with the idea of bringing out the rose and blue tones just a bit more.
Btw, have you posted your winning Halloween shot somewhere we could see it?
Cheers,
Gretchen
My SmugMug Galleries
Diva - Both dogs are females. Do you think if I lightened the eyes a little it would help the connection or is it overall?
Kwickers - My retriever would love that but the mutt is way too prissy. Some awesome shots in that gallery. Does this crop help with what you were saying about the dock photos?
Sapphire73, this is the photo that won the contest in print. If it should be moved please let me know and I will make a different thread.
Tom
You might want to give your crop of #2 a number (or call it #2b) so people can refer to it in their comments. I would love to see another version with just a third of the sky cropped so that we can see the bird in the sky and the lighter clouds just above and to the right of it.
Good luck with it!
Gretchen
My SmugMug Galleries
I like the dock shots, but my eye goes straight to the sunset in both of them. The docks might catch my eye more if it were more of a silhouette against the sky rather than against the lake & trees (lower perspective?).
I prefer the dog shots - #3 is very cute but I'm also wanting to see more of the eyes - either brighter or looking into or toward the camera. The expression in #4 is great - good focus & lighting too. If you cropped it tighter on the top & right (even cropping a touch off the head & ear), the closeness of the bottom might appear intentional.
A photograph is an artistic expression of life, captured one moment at a time . . .
http://bartlettphotoart.smugmug.com/
If I could tell the story in words, I wouldn't need to lug around a camera. ~Lewis Hine
http://sandizphotos-seascapes.smugmug.com/
#2 is gorgeous, but I don't think it is as strongly 'D' as #1 or #3 and #4.
Spread the love! Go comment on something!