"P" Ideas

PedalGirlPedalGirl Registered Users Posts: 794 Major grins
edited November 22, 2011 in The Dgrin Challenges
OK... some ideas I could actually submit. Working on Peas, Pomegranates and of course Pedals... but will start with...

Post Script...
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Pho-tog-ra-pher (n) 1. One who practices photography 2. one obsessed with capturing life with their camera. 3. One who eats, sleeps and breathes photographs. 4. One who sees the world in 4x6.
www.lisaspeakmanphotography.com

Comments

  • kwickerskwickers Registered Users Posts: 310 Major grins
    edited November 21, 2011
    Nice selective Focus and DOF. Looks like the paper is 'floating' above the background images gives me a unrealistic feel. I like the image. The gray Gradient line (or editing of some type or pen shadow) on the top left corner bothers me a little.
    Photos.KeithWickersham.com
  • PedalGirlPedalGirl Registered Users Posts: 794 Major grins
    edited November 21, 2011
    That would be the shadow of the pen... I blended some of that away... is this better?
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    Pho-tog-ra-pher (n) 1. One who practices photography 2. one obsessed with capturing life with their camera. 3. One who eats, sleeps and breathes photographs. 4. One who sees the world in 4x6.
    www.lisaspeakmanphotography.com
  • kwickerskwickers Registered Users Posts: 310 Major grins
    edited November 21, 2011
    yes that removed the line I was seeing.
    Photos.KeithWickersham.com
  • SeascapeSSeascapeS Registered Users Posts: 814 Major grins
    edited November 21, 2011
    I like the combination and the colors (golds, greens, silvers), but maybe a different arrangement would work better? I agree with Keith about the floating paper. Maybe smaller script and less paper showing would make a difference.
    SandiZ
    If I could tell the story in words, I wouldn't need to lug around a camera. ~Lewis Hine
    http://sandizphotos-seascapes.smugmug.com/
  • lkbartlkbart Registered Users Posts: 1,912 Major grins
    edited November 22, 2011
    15524779-Ti.gifOr maybe a bigger crop. My eye is drawn to the green & yellow box in the corner.
    ~Lillian~
    A photograph is an artistic expression of life, captured one moment at a time . . .
    http://bartlettphotoart.smugmug.com/
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