Help! Which version? "P"

PedalGirl

Didn't have time to work on my other ideas... so I'm down to these 2 versions of "Postscript"... Which is better? Any suggestions?

#1


#2

VisualXpressions

#2 is much better than #1

richtersl

VisualXpressions wrote: »

#2 is much better than #1

Love the little pop of color in that one!

silversx80

+2 on #2. I'm hardly ever a fan of selective/isolated color, but it is pulled off wonderfully.

zoomer

2, crop the left side off to the edge of the pen. Take the red out add some grain and vignette around the text.
But then it would be how I see it not you .

I think you have a great idea here. As posted I would go with 1.

sapphire73

Both convey your great idea for this challenge but I can see why folks are drawn to the pop of color in #2. Good luck!

tinamarie52

I like #2. simpler, nice selective color, more pop.

Kinkajou

I, being a total weirdo, love the feel of #1. The pop of color in #2 distracts from the point of the image for me, which is the post-script... it becomes more about the heart than the post-script as a whole.

PedalGirl

Thanks for the input guys... I went ahead and entered #2. Keeping my fingers crossed!