One long, one short

michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
edited December 7, 2011 in Street and Documentary
1) Long
DS22174-Version-2-XL.jpg


2) Short
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  • toragstorags Registered Users Posts: 4,615 Major grins
    edited December 6, 2011
    I'm liking #1 a lot

    Good conversion, well composed

    Nice work
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  • Quincy TQuincy T Registered Users Posts: 1,090 Major grins
    edited December 7, 2011
    I love #1. What a juxtaposition of lifestyles!
  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,961 moderator
    edited December 7, 2011
    #1 has a lot going for it--composition, lines, light, juxtaposition. Nicely seen. I think #2 has too much dead space to the left.
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  • RSLRSL Registered Users Posts: 839 Major grins
    edited December 7, 2011
    Fine work, Jennifer. #1 is good street. #2 is very good environmental portraiture. Placement of the figure is good, and you need the interestingly textured "dead space" to the left.
    Russ Lewis
    www.FineArtSnaps.com
  • M38A1M38A1 Registered Users Posts: 1,317 Major grins
    edited December 7, 2011
    I like #1, but prefer #2 for the portraiture aspect. That type of 'edgy' image in #2 I find more appealing if I had to compare them.
  • MarkRMarkR Registered Users Posts: 2,099 Major grins
    edited December 7, 2011
    Frist time I saw #1 I thought you had posted two pictures-- I use the "White" dgrin background for readability, which happens to be the same tone as the dividing line to the wall in the middle, so I saw two landscape photographs instead of one portrait image of two separate subjects. Neat.
  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited December 7, 2011
    I like them both just the way they are
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  • michswissmichswiss Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,235 Major grins
    edited December 7, 2011
    Thanks guys. About the long shot... After seeing others here with their long-lense shots, I brought out my 180mm prime to see what all the fun was about. Of course, most of my shots with it were to see how close I could get and still have the darned thing focus. I really love it's rendering though. I'll post a few others over the next week or so. The second was on the opposite end of the spectrum, the 20mm taken in a back Melbourne Laneway.
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