Commercial work

D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,188 Major grins
edited December 12, 2011 in People
I was recently asked to take a few shots for a BMW flyer, showing the quick service lane. Since this is not really my thing , here one of the pictures for comments. Maybe some of you have done similar work. Any tips more then welcome.
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A photographer without a style, is like a pub without beer

Comments

  • BrettDeutschBrettDeutsch Registered Users Posts: 365 Major grins
    edited December 12, 2011
    I'm not feeling a story here. A team of workers doing work on the car like it was pit row would say "quick service lane" more to me than a couple of guys filling out paperwork and a computer monitor does.
    Deutsch Photography: Actor & Executive Headshot Photographer | NY Wedding, Mitzvah and Corporate Event Photographer | Family & Child Portrait Studio
  • D3SshooterD3Sshooter Registered Users Posts: 1,188 Major grins
    edited December 12, 2011
    Brett , indeed you have a point. That is the problem when one knows what happens in the fast service lane, it seems that I could not bring it across. Thanks for the honest comment.
    A photographer without a style, is like a pub without beer
  • TravelTravel Registered Users Posts: 276 Major grins
    edited December 12, 2011
    On shots like this I take the people out to make it a fine art print. After I can do that, then I figure out where to put the people. Let's talk a little, look at the younger guy. His pose is great! the leading line of his arm really good. His head is tilted down but not too much. Look at the older guy what we see is the top of his head not good. What else: you don't see the whole car, Lot's of crap on the desk, Light on wheel by head. This might have been better with a wide lens if you moved in closer to the guys. Then the car would be farther in the back.
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