Yes- I think this works to a degree. I actually love the upper third of the photo with the soft tones and the white negative space. I'd like to see the tones pushed a little more to offer more contract throughout the image to make it a bit more dynamic.
You could also try a few different b&w conversions. I think this is am image that could be manipulated a multitude of ways.
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I thought the very light sky at first seemed abrupt....but my eye started there and just moved back and forth as it went down. Lovely. Something tells me you could make an incredible study out of this location. Different times of day...different times of year. Beautiful textures.
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You could also try a few different b&w conversions. I think this is am image that could be manipulated a multitude of ways.
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