This has a cinematic feel to it but I'm not keen on the overall tones and I'm quite distracted by her hair (right side of her face) which is "hot" enough to draw my eyes away from her eye
I like the concept of the photo. The overall soft look makes the slightly oversharpened eye (it looks like the sharpen tool was ran over it a couple times) area not fit well into the photo, if the eye area were softened/blurred just a hair might work better. As mentioned, the side of her face and hair is a bit hot.
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