I like the idea of this image torags, but I feel like something was lost in the conversion between the 3D scene in your mind and the 2D conversion here. I think if you could use the leading lines of the field and the semi-circle of these tents and create some sort of focus towards the men in red it might be better. That's just my two cents.
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My guess was they were the onsite packaging of shallots (maybe?)