DSS #94 entry (first shot) C&C more than welcome :)

CHANDLERJACHANDLERJA Registered Users Posts: 400 Major grins
edited January 12, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
I shot this on the way home from a job site yesterday. Its a covered picnic area at a rest stop. The light was just right for some nice shadows. Any thoughts?

Thank you for any help or comments!! :)


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Jeromy
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Light is everything in life and photography.

Comments

  • JennJenn Registered Users Posts: 1,009 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2012
    I like it, but my *eye* isn't sure what to look at first... if that makes any sense?

    CHANDLERJA wrote: »
    I shot this on the way home from a job site yesterday. Its a covered picnic area at a rest stop. The light was just right for some nice shadows. Any thoughts?

    Thank you for any help or comments!! :)
    Jenn (from Oklahoma)
    Panasonic Lumix 10x DMC-TZ3 :photo
    Leica Mega O.I.S./28mm WIDE :smile6
  • CHANDLERJACHANDLERJA Registered Users Posts: 400 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2012
    Thank you Jenn! And I do see what you mean!

    Does color help at all? Thanks again!

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    Jeromy
    http://snaptx.smugmug.com/
    Light is everything in life and photography.
  • martinjp2martinjp2 Registered Users Posts: 29 Big grins
    edited January 11, 2012
    You might try cropping out the grill that should keep the angles and get rid of the distractions.
  • martinjp2martinjp2 Registered Users Posts: 29 Big grins
    edited January 11, 2012
    Also, I like the warmth of the color.
  • BendrBendr Registered Users Posts: 665 Major grins
    edited January 11, 2012
    I think i'm going to agree, I see the angles, and I like them, but rather than helping the image, the grill distracts, try cropping it out.

    Also, agree about the color, I like it more.

    Ben
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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited January 12, 2012
    The image looks a little busy to me, and it doesn't really say angles or shapes - maybe you can find another subject... headscratch.gif
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  • CHANDLERJACHANDLERJA Registered Users Posts: 400 Major grins
    edited January 12, 2012
    Thank you everyone! I have decided to shoot something else downtown this weekend!
    I can already tell I'm going to have a hard time deciding on what to shoot!!

    Thanks again!
    Jeromy
    http://snaptx.smugmug.com/
    Light is everything in life and photography.
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