DSS94 - Second concept

cbbr

Angles & Shapes -

Troy Raymond

First word that comes to mind is busy. A lot of shapes and angles but challenging to separate.

Every image will also be viewed as a smaller square in the gallery, view the image smaller or step back from your screen and decide if it is something that will attract viewers.

cbbr

Thanks Troy - an honest critique is the reason for posts like this and is much appreciated.

Jenn

I like the concept, but it kind of hurts my eyes to look at it. I'm not sure why tho.

cbbr

Thanks - I think that Troy is right, there is just too much going on in it.

travelways

Too busy, yes -

billseye

Yep... Definitely busy. I think some I that busy-ness is a result of what appears to be overhead lights.

cbbr

The lights are actually the single flash - I "built" (think gaffers tape) a mirror box to play with for this challenge. So its a mirror bottom, sides and top shrouded to hide the camera. I am looking at different items and lighting now.

CHANDLERJA

I understand the concept you were aiming for and I like it. But in the end it really is to busy with no real focal point. I would try removing the top right globe and re shooting with just the center globe.

cbbr

Thanks - looking back, we definately went overboard. D