DSS #94 two ways to go C&C please.

DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
edited January 17, 2012 in The Dgrin Challenges
1) The Prow at the EcoTarium.

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2) EcoTarium Exhibit space Model. Scale is 3/8" to 1' - 0" plexi built by myself.

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  • travelwaystravelways Registered Users Posts: 7,854 Major grins
    edited January 16, 2012
    I think #1 is better than #2 which to me looks a little too busy.
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  • billseyebillseye Registered Users Posts: 847 Major grins
    edited January 17, 2012
    I prefer #1.
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  • slpollettslpollett Registered Users Posts: 1,223 Major grins
    edited January 17, 2012
    I like #1 a bit better as it has more symmetry. I like #2, but it is very busy and the bright light/glare on the right side is a teeny bit distracting.

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  • CHANDLERJACHANDLERJA Registered Users Posts: 400 Major grins
    edited January 17, 2012
    I like #1 as well. The only thing I would change is masking out whatever the black thing is bottom center. For me its a distraction from the over all symmetry.
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  • KinkajouKinkajou Registered Users Posts: 1,240 Major grins
    edited January 17, 2012
    Can you crop #1 where the glare starts in the bottom 1/4 of the image? It would strengthen the 'shape' focus quite a bit and clean up some of the distractions at the bottom. Good one!
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  • DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited January 17, 2012
    Kinkajou wrote: »
    Can you crop #1 where the glare starts in the bottom 1/4 of the image? It would strengthen the 'shape' focus quite a bit and clean up some of the distractions at the bottom. Good one!
    Actually, before I do that, maybe i'll try a polarizing filter and see if I can get a cleaner shot with that! :D

    More abstract would be good, but I want to give it a try!

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  • DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited January 17, 2012
    CHANDLERJA wrote: »
    I like #1 as well. The only thing I would change is masking out whatever the black thing is bottom center. For me its a distraction from the over all symmetry.
    You mean the top of our Mt Washington exhibit iconic mountain?

    I'll see how the CPL shot goes! thumb.gif

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  • DonRicklinDonRicklin Registered Users Posts: 5,551 Major grins
    edited January 17, 2012
    Here is a cropped, reprocessed version of #1:

    3)
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    I am posting this one, for now, at least.

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  • GretaPicsGretaPics Registered Users Posts: 373 Major grins
    edited January 17, 2012
    Yes, I'm liking your newest version #3. Nice repetition of shapes and the cropped reprocessed image reveals that better. GP
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